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never before, these thoughts
that now keep me prisoner
in my self-acclaimed abode

when the river flows
and the dangers of early dawn
dawns on the fertile and fragile face
of my creator;
then the whirlwind from the
holes of my nostrils
shall abide with me
and keep me calm
in wondrous ways of saying:
never before, these thoughts.

the dangers that bestrides me
were the ones that saved me
where did these thoughts came from
who sold them to me
never befroe these thoughts
i found so hard to kill...

to stay, it has come
and i will forever be captive
to these thoughts that brought
me into the lime-light
making my dream of a million nights realized.

-Peters (+2348073676677)

dayo desina peters

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