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Last night...
she came to me


with her myriad steppings
i lost my head
and joined the ancestors
in the bliss of heavens.

let the waters flow...
to keep me cool and calm
let my head be held high
and with straight face
have compassion for the running tears

i am the glowing scores-
the priced products on the boulder
i am the prey that sinks sinners
into the everlasting agony imagined

let the waters flow...
through the course of my sleep
let my eyes witness not
the pure vaginity bleedings
that tramples me on


let the waters flow...
in my absence.

dayo desina peters

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