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While you come so near I come so far,
Romance me, my Adonai, show me who You are.
Allow me to experience Your eloquent Glory and Grace,
Hide not from me the Power in Your Righteous Face.
There is none like You, my God, my buckler and my shield,
Greater is my belonging to You then any other
Sheep of the field.
The journey, as well as, my love for You is
Timeless this much I know,
Nevertheless, in my travel I can not be lost
Because You're everywhere I want to go.

I Love You, my Lord
The Skunk, Preston McKenzie

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The following comments are for "Adonai, my belonging"
by skunk3632004

Dear desvelado,

Nice to hear from you.
My poem, "Adonai, my belonging," is just an expression of Love for Adonai, my God, nothing more or nothing less. I mean, we, as human beings, express our love for our relatives, our neighbors , our friends, even love for ouselves, etc., why not express love for our God. As such, I like being referred to as sheep, one reason, because a prophetic parable spoken of by Jesus Christ divides mankind into two symbolic creatures-the sheep and the goats. And the sheep, unlike the goats, belong to Adonai.
Well, desvelado, "What's up with the skunk monikor?" The Skunk moniker (nick name)came about as an appearance of myself "Here to Raise a stink" (an argument, "let's see it in black and white") concerning the political & social issues that have a negative impact on all of our lives, for example, I believe that every man, woman and child should have access to affordable healthcare, no matter their income or social status. Accordingly, many good people have supported my political point of views and have urged me to become an advocate or a politician. But, instead, I choose to give Glory to God because during the successful times in my life that is something I have forgot to do, still I kept the nickname "The Skunk."

The Skunk

( Posted by: skunk3632004 [Member] On: June 29, 2008 )

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