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Full Circle
by Fairplay (Member) - published: June 17, 2008
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I glaze into the future
What do I perceive
A little global Warming
Could all our stress relieve?
Far to busy staying cool
Staunching Floods from Thaw
Maybe Bond together
Not just go to war
But amid the fornication
What is my concern?
No one shares resources
Rather fight than Learn
Evolving back to animals
The likes from which we came
No more manifestations
With far to big a brain


------
Eric XXX


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by Fairplay

Huzzah...
Great job man..full-circle indeed...there are already a great deal of us in danger of losing human status...I suspect as u say we will have a lot more clever animals than human beings in the years ahead...lets hope not though...

( Posted by: kilgoretrout [Member] On: June 18, 2008 )

reverting to primal roots
balloon's gotta pop sometime, right?

( Posted by: ghostpoisonsturgeon [Member] On: June 18, 2008 )

Eric full circle
Like very much "glaze" instead of "gaze" into the future, as the future does need glazing doesn't it, if it's to be tolerable...

Ah, to become one-celled again! But WHICH cell? Hmmm.

No one shares resources indeed! I know, I just know we can fuel cars with torn pantyhose because somebody somewhere invented that, but God forbid we ever find out about it, eh?

I like the observations you make here.

Thank you.

Lucie

( Posted by: windchime [Member] On: June 25, 2008 )

Good v Evil
Thanks Terence…
Just happened to watch Planet of the Apes the other day…

I think the possibility of competing with less intelligent but more resilient species that have a natural ability to sustain their own lives independently does exist….

Humans are the least capable in reality and make up for it with intelligence?… almost clever enough to destroy ourselves it seems…. After saying that I have had a good life… tinned food and all...

Hi Cam
Balloons popping… well maybe some will.

I think its more like Balloons left up after a party… some deflate slowly some hang around a while…whichever , not a pleasing sight

Lucy
Good to get a comment from you again.

Yes I did use glaze for that reason…

I think it has been apparent (for as long as I have been around) that the reasoning behind cars and fuel was to take money from the masses… Other more efficient use of energy have been known for ages….. The term “Horse Dealer” springs to mind.

Too many intelligent greedy people in the world is my observation… often happy to let other people fight their battles.

After saying that I have met so many good kind people it’s hard to understand how on earth bad seems to rule over good so often.
Eric

( Posted by: Fairplay [Member] On: June 25, 2008 )





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