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I know you’re watching.
I know you’re waiting.
Your saucer wouldn’t carry
More than what I’m sharing.

I know you’re breaking
And you tried to break him.
That’s as far as our story
Gets unpublished.

I know you loath it.
I saw you lost it.
That summer dress heat
Cooked you off beat.

Nigel, Nigel,
Flee the state’s beach.


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