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Fear of my heart
to bleed again.
Oh, how long
it has been,

since my heart
has had any feel.
Always afraid
of being the
fifth wheel.

It is true,
that I can be knieve.
Not assuming,
that one can deceive.

Difficult it is
for me to trust.
If I don't,
my heart will
certainly rust.

I hope that
I don't get too used.
Well, maybe not,
because I'm used
to the abuse.

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