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where panthers go
by Bobby7L (Member) - published: June 13, 2008
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Category - Poetry
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am living
negotiating imperfect storms
a displaced revolutionary
working nonworkable schemes

what became of Angela Davis..

like a freed wasp from my Pop Pop's hand
flying
a river-skipped stone
rippling uncollectable dreams

..that sweet black angel



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As little knowledge is dangerous, even more so is much.




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by Bobby7L

uncollected dreams
Nice work. I like the economy and clarity of an idea.Who of us has not over the years left behind such self defining ideals for the slap-dash accident of what life gives us.
Thanks

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: June 15, 2008 )

panther lore
I liked where it was and where it was headed. The title drew me in and I was reminded of "Poet" from the series "Oz" with less swearing. I can only say it was too short and hope to read more.
Good writings
smithy

( Posted by: smithy [Member] On: June 18, 2008 )

jonp/smithy..
jonpenny-

Thank you kindly,
RW

smithy-
wordy, am not..

Thanks

Bibbing in Babylon,
B

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: June 18, 2008 )





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