- published: June 14, 2008
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The audience sat on layered bands,
Staging speculated layered stands,
Working pouts behind layered fence,
Clapping sights on layered strands.
Watch them pee layers in their pants.
Baa Baa, Twisted.
Love on Locks.
Morning Hot Choc.
Natalie in 4" Pumps.
Emily Whoops’ Blanket.
There You Are!
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