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Gab doesn't want to be friends with Nat.
She fell from the clouds and hurt her neck.
Stepped into a puddle and got wet.
The wings don't look as good on her back.
Now she's nothing but a total wreck.
Lost her way home and went round the track.
Found a black cat resting on his fats.
Three miles down there's a rabbit in a hat.
They brought her cheese from the running rat.
Took her down the lane to lovers' sack.
So Nat stayed on and gave what she lacked.

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