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Day by day,
we are drifting apart.
This I know,
because it is in my heart.

Sooner or later,
she will see.
That we were
never meant to be.

Passion and lust
last only a short time,
because in the begining,
she was never mine.

The thrill of the chase
is all but done.
At least for a short time,
we had some fun.



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The following comments are for "Drifting"
by BobT

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A compilation book of poetry, "Needful Writes 101" by BobT now available at Amazon.com.

( Posted by: BobT [Member] On: June 11, 2008 )





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