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I dug my way into your dream,
went diving for jewels in a stream,
i found some diamonds and swam
further and deeper,into what i thought
was a cave,the water was a hoaxer,
it turned out to be your womb,
i left my diamonds and dug my way out,
your diamond womb gave birth to a
bejeweled universe.


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whoever you are come forth these are the days that must happen to you.


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