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Infinite Supply


As I wake to another day alive
with so much beauty outside
my peaceful mind begins to wonder.

With all the evils in ones life
that's been seen throughout all time
why does it not halt my love
and put me under?

It was not so long ago
it seemed my only hope
was to accomplish an infinite sleep.

But today I am amazed
that most are good days
with few tears for my loving heart to weep.

Yes still sometimes I do cry
and I often wonder why
has God not yet given me a love of my own.

A heart to adore
for my love has so much more
to offer when not so painfully alone.

I wish for him to see
the love so deep inside of me
everyday with all I am eager to show.

To nurture his mind, body and soul
is my soul's only goal
and fill this lifetime with an omniscient love.

Yet perhaps I seek too far from home
what's been present all along
not for selfish reasons
is the mission of this infinite supply.

Is my love not meant for one man
is the grander purpose at hand
a glorious journey
to share my love for all of mankind?


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by TAMMYHENDRIX

recalli...troubles afoot
Hello sir,

Sorry to be the bearer of bad news but I just attempted to login several times to post this piece.

I was unsuccessful every time with the home page login and the control panel as well. I was able to access through the lit.org menu- submit button.
I clicked, posted and added my id and password there. As is obvious here, I am able to view and comment.

I don't know if this is the beginning of another issue but I thought I should let you know.

As for myself, although I cannot access items such as manage writings I can post by the way I explained above so...it's all go.

Sorry sir I don't mean to complain or be a pain in the rumproast.

( Posted by: TAMMYHENDRIX [Member] On: June 8, 2008 )

One more thing Mr. Recalli
sorry but I just wanted to compliment the efficiency with which y'all do your job. I just submitted this a few minutes ago...maybe...10 minutes or so.

Wow! you guys are GOOD!

( Posted by: TAMMYHENDRIX [Member] On: June 8, 2008 )

loving and loneliness
Tammy, reading this I was reminded- not sure why- of Shelly’s “Art thou Pale for weariness” fragment:

Art thou pale for weariness
Of climbing heaven and gazing on the earth,
Wandering companionless
Among the stars that have a different birth,
And ever changing, like a joyless eye
That finds no object worth its constancy?

Something like that anyway… like I said, I don’t know why… maybe its just the image of the infinite, suggesting something cosmic about the poem? maybe its just me and me twisted brain… but I get the feeling those words will hold some truth for you…

always have liked representations of infinity and the infinite in poetry. best to ye.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: June 10, 2008 )

Lonely heart....hopeful heart
Poetry has such power doesn't it. Not always in the words, but in the emotions they invoke. This is such an evocative piece. Lots of pain...and yet that underlying optimism shines through:'...most are good days...'.

For those of us who have known that deep loneliness, there is a life here, a reminder...'Tomorrow is another day...'

( Posted by: sebastian08 [Member] On: June 11, 2008 )

glorious journey
Liked how you began by acknowledging you have already found your place in the world and then move on to question everything else.

Don't know how long you've been writing but you seem to be growing in leaps and bounds. Glad you have stuck to writing in your voice and dropped the dictionary.

( Posted by: desvelado [Member] On: June 16, 2008 )





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