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Robes of silk and smelly fur
Hang
Indifferent signs
Scales, spikes, and toughened leather
- Short disarticulated laugh -
She wears my darkest dreams tonight
Slender goddess riding on my neck
( One time I saw her choke a feeling to death )
Narrow touching and her pale blue skin
Cold nostrils vacuum machine and a feather
- See I always thought words can't harm you
Spiked necklace and a golden charm
( Resting on a blue smothered tissue )
In comes a deep dark feeling riding on an instant
Void gestures and a ruptured envelope of pain
PLEASURE
Time to pause ....................... deep breath
YOU CAN
Scream your dreams out on an empty wall
And then commit ritual suicide
With your head submersed in a bucket of silence



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The following comments are for "Natura Dominatrix"
by Paradox

"disarticulated"
worth it for that line alone, chillingly evocative that. the last time too, both absurd and disturbing enough to leave a shiver on a skin...

thanks for the Jungian romp through this, very much enjoyed.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: June 10, 2008 )





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