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The morning is like a lover,
Undresses us
Hurriedly

We stand before mirrors
Methodically ordinary

We want to become
The things the sky promised
Want to prove ourselves
To the reckless Gods of
Wednesday.

I love your hair,
Darker now
And longer too

But a kiss is never
More than is missing
And you’ve come to rely
On abstinence
To buoy you.

I’m thinking, you know
I might have
The red meat of
Salvation in me

Won’t go no more
Rendering unto
Any old body

Might pause,
Might make small
Circular devotions,
Like washing windows.

Would you want me then?

If I was more clean
Less Godly,

The stitches of self-imposed
Holiness
Unpicked

Replaced by something
More faithful
Less moral?

Or if I believed
In any rest
Other than eternal?

Would you want me then?

If the action of
Going to me knees
Had less to do with praying

More to do with
God?



------
The human race, the only race I know where everybody loses.


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The following comments are for "untitled"
by AuldMiseryGuts

orphaned...
I never cease to be amazed at the sheer beauty of your words - they always take my breath away.

Namaste,
Tina x

( Posted by: tinalouise [Member] On: June 11, 2008 )

Want me
Think the subject line would be a good title for this poem because it can be read as all knowing or begging.

If not mistaken, I think this might be about John. Think sometimes the best is best left alone. I prefer to let others bury my past so I don't have to go finding it where I left it. But that's me: I was a breech baby. Or so I want to believe...

Hope you're feeling better.

( Posted by: desvelado [Member] On: June 15, 2008 )

correction
Meant the past is best left alone.

( Posted by: desvelado [Member] On: June 17, 2008 )

untitled
I sense the deep yearning in the words I read here. Can't help but wonder who they are addressed to. And yet, if it is God surely He would know. Need to write again, myself. Stephanie

( Posted by: EchoMarm [Member] On: July 22, 2008 )





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