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The smell...
the essence of this lingering piece of perfection
lit with colors only an adoring eye dare see,
lying here next to me

the aroma entoxicates me
takes me higher
makes me feel full

I drink and eat of its purity
oh, how I'd love to hold this flower in my arms
caressing it's petals...freely

smiles of beauty
smells of earth and rain refreshed of all that is good and natural

lays on you...thick
...and rested

Oh, this flower
this remarkable piece of beauty
this enchanted gift from God
this wonderous mystery

...has smitten me
I take time, I take reason and engolf the opportunity with loving senses... with my arms and hold...

...the flower that I love


Inspired by..rock3

------
LMJ


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The following comments are for "The flower that I love..."
by LMJ

piece of perfection
what impresses me about this is that the so-called "softer" emotions are much harder to pull off successfully in a performance piece...

this one, however, shows the possibilities of the form when it works well! love the phrase “has smitten me”, really nice, lyrical and flowing.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: June 6, 2008 )

My naked field & your flowers
Very lovely view. I love to close my eyes and revisit my wide open naked field and here you have provided a new presence in this moment within this "haven" of mine...the smell, feeling and soul expanding presence of flowers that surround and lay over my naked body.mmmmmmm...all it takes is to close my eyes...I am there.

Thank you for for peaceful, beautiful moment.

( Posted by: TAMMYHENDRIX [Member] On: June 6, 2008 )

Exactly!
what can I say? you're absolutely right!
thanks for being such a muse!

( Posted by: LMJ [Member] On: June 9, 2008 )





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