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Who will be there..
To share the moment, to see the sight.....
To feel what I feel, and hold me tight....
To hold my hand, and not let go...........
To wipe my tears, when I'm low............
To be by my side, when I am over the hill.
To say my name, when no one else will.....

My tears, the silence, they both tell me.....

No one.


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The following comments are for "Who will be there.."
by Myndraker

Question......
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( Posted by: ilgaar [Member] On: August 30, 2009 )

To ilgaar
You seemed confused? What question did you send?

( Posted by: Myndraker [Member] On: September 20, 2010 )





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