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Brothers here
Brothers there
Brothers scatterd
Brothers

Walking Spirit Equates
never late
Right on Time
I seen it all
in a Nursary
Ryhme

what i saw
was the End of
Time...

an Open Mind
Hidden Masked
well...

War in heaven
Air thoughts
Flow

Brother Neil
Knows...





------
poetricky



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The following comments are for "Walking Spirit"
by Zeus

left me unsure
what it is that "Brother Neil/ Knows..." but I was intrigued by the end of time, nursery rhyme conjunction... like how this implies that the answers we seek are really only very simple after all, if only we look and listen... nice. glad you could join us again.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: June 4, 2008 )

what it is that
ahh... thanks for asking,
what it is that "Brother Neil/ Knows...

i feel he knows
what i saw at the End of
Time...

Thankyou for the Warm Welcome Back
im looking forward to Reading
Here i been offline for a while,


( Posted by: Zeus [Member] On: June 4, 2008 )

Welcome back Zeus...
Good to see you post again...I too have been off and on for awhile. Long story. I'll myspace.com you on the details. But, hey, I like this...Neil Young, have always love him, and like Francisco said, anyone who can capture his brilliance is OK in my book too. And yes, indeed, your free spirit has been missed.

Blessings

( Posted by: TheRealKarmaTseringLhamo [Member] On: June 4, 2008 )

Sweet Caroline good times...
Neil Diamond is one of my all time favorites. Never, ever get tired of Sweet Caroline...bum, bum, bum... I made an awesome playlist of his music.

One things for certain...when we do arrive at the end of time legends like Neil will still be hangin' around!

( Posted by: TAMMYHENDRIX [Member] On: June 7, 2008 )





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