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“Gary don’t move, I’ll be there in two seconds”.
“Darling everything’s going to be fine, mummy’s here”.
“The man was bludgeoned to death in his apartment, a neighbour was slightly injured”.
“Did you here someone was killed in apartment 2 in the corner house?”.
“Do you know who lived in that apartment?”.
“I wonder when we will go to war”.
“Don’t they realize thousands will die?”.
“One minute you could be talking, the next minute you could be dead, life is so precious”.
“Does he not realize the whole world is against them, hating and slandering”.
“Did you here someone was killed in apartment 2 in the corner house?”.
“Do you ever wonder how you’re going to die?”.
“Darling we need some milk, I won’t be long”.
“Did you here someone was killed in apartment 2 in the corner house?”.
“I could murder a pint”.
“How could someone hammer someone to death?”.
“All you need is love”.



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C.lynagh


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The following comments are for "Interlude"
by C.Lynagh

Rough, raw, and powerful
Rough, raw, and very powerful. Super piece of writing, and very brave as a piece of poetry.
Only one thing - it should be "hear", not "here".
Score 8/10.

( Posted by: Spudley [Member] On: March 5, 2003 )

Interlude
Disturbing piece of "Verse"??.In the middle of life there is death and there is Love. Is this what C is trying to say?

( Posted by: Eustace [Member] On: March 6, 2003 )





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