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Lecturing Invisible Children
by kilgoretrout (Member) - published: May 30, 2008
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I walk through the human maze of Union Square
Lecturing Invisible Children...

The people stand in a circle and stare at the center
Theyve started a fight club...

Is that legal? Do I care? Is it raining?

I see a patch of undouchebagged grass
An unfortunate scarcity...

The trees never sneer like Union Square Douchebags
Perhaps they never learned how...




------
Terence Patrick Burns


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by kilgoretrout

trees never sneer
Yippee! The band is getting back together! Just waiting for a few more regulars and life will be complete.

Missed your cyclops wit and sasquatch baby loving ways but you know there are pills that will help with these visions of yours.

There's an indifference in this poem that is troubling. It's as if you've ceased caring and that is a dangerous thing. I do love "undouchebagged" though. It's another keeper in the Burns lexicon.

If it'll put a smile on your face, Tammy is still waiting to get jumped into the gang...

( Posted by: desvelado [Member] On: May 30, 2008 )

D,D,D,D,did I see who I thunk I saw?
ALRIGHT NOW!!!

I know with all the joking I do about not getting any I'm pretty much an open target but jeez!

What is this "jumped" deal all about and.......is it something I'd like? (in the immortal and hilarious words of Shannon he,he!)

Well, well, well nice to see the freaky one back in town. I have to be honest Kil I haven't been faithful...I've been interviewing other stalkers who are fond of the big "D's" Hey, that's what happens when you don't take care of things at home.

Welcome home


( Posted by: TAMMYHENDRIX [Member] On: May 30, 2008 )

it reminds me
of taking my tiny Goddaughter Connie on a picnic to Green Park, nary an undouchbagged spot, there was, and only the trees accepted the blistering heat and the idiot surplus with any degree of stoicism or equanimity…

Although that doesn’t mean they weren’t sneering on the inside. you never can tell with trees… inscrutable bastards…

missed you… missed you so much I’m not even going to make a joke about missing you but my aim is improving all the time… ;)

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: May 31, 2008 )

tree love is true
I bet you're a tree hugger like me. Literally, I mean. As in Druid-like love and worship. I love trees, nature, natural patches of grass that have not been touched and ruined by douchebaggery. In many years past I come to close blows over trees that were killed unnecessarily by over zealous tree hating landlord types and city employee assholes types...but now that I am a much more peaceful person I avoid tree conflicts with douchebaggers.

Blessings and Namaste

( Posted by: TheRealKarmaTseringLhamo [Member] On: May 31, 2008 )

Spanking four...
Thanks children...I was stuck in a carpel tunnel...

Two things...1894 was not a good year...and Outer Space is very very cold...

Goodbye for now...

( Posted by: kilgoretrout [Member] On: June 2, 2008 )

high and dry
So that's it? You whet our appetites only to leave us high and dry?

I suppose I can't blame you since you weren't the only one burned out by all things internet.

Hope you're well and you have my e-mail.

( Posted by: desvelado [Member] On: June 2, 2008 )

Terence
Terence...

it's obvious that someone here needs more! Come on....feed him!

Good to see you

( Posted by: TAMMYHENDRIX [Member] On: June 2, 2008 )





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