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Where are you
my love

...I'm waiting

waiting for you to push my hair back behind my ear and kiss me deeply on my neck
so deeply that I have to do a panty check
cause I'm moist

...and you say: it's alright, I'm here

moist with thoughts of you touching my soul and me: tasting the knowlege on the tip of my tongue that you so eloquently put down in such a vibrant motion with respect

oh yeah, verbs the word

I have been able to see inside of your mind through other senses and you blow me

...I'm waiting

The stimulation is paramount and never ends
time after time you spend me until I am completely spent

... and limp ooo- baby- baby I have given you all of me and have recieved you fully

...and you say: it's alright I'm here

Pulling me up with your strength and taking me to mountains and plains that meet the sky and as the sun melts into the darkness I watch as the stars dance above your head and I breathe

...softly and gently

I'm happy and you?
you're here and it's true,
it's alright


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The following comments are for "I'm waiting..."
by LMJ

Where's my panties?!
" deeply I have to do a panty check..." Funny! I couldn't help but laugh at that.

But what if you don't wear me!

Boy oh boy can you imagine you and I in a room together....lord the nasty thoughts would be felt from a mile away! Talk about raging hormones!

Not that this isn't good because it is...but for some reason the word "moist" sounds kind of...nasty and I don't mean in a good way. Just think about it for a moment.

Thank you for the chuckle and the smile

( Posted by: TAMMYHENDRIX [Member] On: May 29, 2008 )

Desvelado & Tammy...

It was late at night and I went there off the top of my head just going off of past feelings and remembering how I felt at the time!

cold showers?!!!! boy am I in the know about those these days! yeaah I looked for you "D" on myspace what happened? ...and I have missed you and your reads in all, I've been so busy with things, I never really leave lit I just take breathers to be able to maintain in life is all, I dart in when I can!

WHY TAMMY! you're welcome! lol I laughed after writting this piece and posted it I couldn't believe I actually posted this piece but hey: It's life!

I'm happy to know that I am not alone! thanks you guys!

( Posted by: LMJ [Member] On: May 29, 2008 )

must be something in the air, hu? really nice to read you again, something full-bodied and free-spirited... joyful, this is, and a lot of fun... but sensual too, as well as sexual, good stuff...

yeah, it must be something in the air... although the only thing moist around is my poor nose. aaah-chooo!

loved this.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: May 29, 2008 )

Hey You!

It's good to see you out and about! I hope you feel better, thanks for the comment! I really like reading you as well. all of you inspre me and sometimes you make me bring my A game in the writting department. I'm told honey has greaat properties when it comes to a cold or flu...and soup!

so suck it up!

( Posted by: LMJ [Member] On: May 30, 2008 )

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