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This story has no happy ending, no hero defeating the big bad wolf, no superman saving the day. I wonít sugar coat a thing. Cinderella stories donít exist, at least not for us. We are those who donít belong and yet are forced to face everyday alone with only the comfort of knowing the end shall come soon. But before I get ahead of myself let me introduce you to us.
First there is Lash, the sadistic one of us. She is silently deadly. When ever we need her she is there. We call her vault, for if you tell her something, you can be sure no one else will find out. She can also be a good ďjudgeĒ of character, which, of course, has nothing to do with her reading people aura. No of course not.
Next there is my right hand man, Sin. (No joke, thatís his name) Iíve known him ever since we were young, like two, so Iíve known him for about thirteen years. We know everything about each other, to where we know what the other is thinking. He also has mad numerical skills, which is why he ďhelpsĒ me with my homework. Heís also wickedly afraid of other people. Well not afraid, he just doesnít like them. When lash started to hang with us, he damn near killed her. Of course, the fact that he could extract any one's memory had absolutely no part in his fear of people.
Lastly, there is me. My name is Satane. (Not really, my real name is Alexandra, but I hate that name) I guess you could call me the leader, or the body guard. I tend to loose my temper easily and I love to fight. Not only am I a black belt in three different martial arts, but Iím also good in street fighting. Iíll go ghetto on your ass. But anyways, thatís basically my group. A few come and go, but there will always be us. Now on with the story.

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The following comments are for "Unholy Water: Intro"
by Kayame

your story
Um.. I think it was a little too short. I know it's an intro but I think you could have given us a little more background info on the team members. Other than that, I'm interested

( Posted by: nikagurl5889 [Member] On: May 29, 2008 )

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