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She has a bug in the planet for the moldy peaches
And she gets to kiss you baby just because she can.
She has a finger stuck in fudge for silverfish-ed novels
And she gets to sleep till 1 because you sleep all you can.
She plays one key on the piano for the extinct pink dinos
And she gets to be happy baby because you’re perfect 10.
She has laundry in the bathtub for rainy island beaches
And she gets to hug you baby because you’re a fan.
She has a typewriter in the rainforest for unicorn naps
And she gets to be a spoilt baby because you’re the man.
She has creaky tracks in that old player for soaked cereal
And she’s silly beyond silly because you understand.

She just likes watching you laugh at them.


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The following comments are for "Natalie in 4" Pumps."
by ^white

very nice
not sure if I've read you before, but I shall certainly have a look through your earlier posts now... love the frenetic rock-and-roll pace of this, lyrical, inventive, and nicely put together. enjoyed. thanks.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: May 29, 2008 )

Tie-dye
Reads like..rock & roll lyrics.

I see a raw fresh garage band in tie-dye t-shirts
on the brink with this as their break out song.

Very cool

( Posted by: TAMMYHENDRIX [Member] On: May 29, 2008 )





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