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To the mother that experienced this precious moment...

A tiny tear was upon her cheek
as she look up into your eyes.
Only God and His angels knew
what waited for her on the other side.

Her tiny hand reached out to you,
as if to say, "bye, bye."
The presence of Holyness filled her room and you knew it was time for her to go.

Jesus' and His angels where there to take your baby home.

The tear on her cheek was gone.
A smile on her face was seen,
as you watched your baby wave bye, bye, as she left with the angels
and our Holy King...

Ms. Janice G Presson

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