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She has green eyes.
They eradicate colors.
They pick up no hues,
No nuance of denunciation.

She plays the piano,
By memorizing keys.
They read no music critique,
No degree of censure.

She sings the blues,
With heart’s precision.
They replicate no chords,
No octave of veracity.

She has green eyes.
Love, they fetch no faults.
You’re captivating as those eyes,
With or without sight.

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