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The liar and her lies,
She lies in front of these eyes.
Itís not going to get better.
She ate up all my fries!

The liar and her lies,
She lies about her thighs.
Itís not going to get better.
She doesnít even know her size!

The liar and her lies,
She lies about her lies.
Itís not going to get better.
Wonít you just feed her to the flies.



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by ^white

poewhit
All those fries, you get those fatty inside the fatty veins* Harveys golden Amy of April fools*

( Posted by: poewhit [Member] On: May 29, 2008 )





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