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Thought that it was too late. Thought everything was set in place/ until the door slammed in your face. The truth shows it’s ugly grin/ you can’t remove yourself of sin. Above the lies you hide, but crawling, I am near/ held within I see your face. You’re trembling with fear.

You’ve just shattered my broken glass skin/ and we thought we were so close to the end./ I stitch myself in place again/ it seems my pain’s my only friend
pathetic-you’re such a fool /to think you’re dreams could come true. Pry open you own ribs/ you receive what no one gives.

Rearrange, I’m so deranged. /Everything you were has changed./ Democracy of your own hate. /You don’t know how to appreciate/You froze, you fell out of place, /trying to fill an empty space and you’re apart of nothing true. Decayed, betrayed and gone stale./ Try to be something and you’ll just fail.

You’ve just shattered my broken glass skin and we thought we were so close to the end I stitch myself in place again it seems my pain’s my only friend
pathetic-you’re such a fool to think you’re dreams could come true. Pry open you own ribs you receive what no one gives.

Try to run away from me under everything it’s hard to see that you can’t get away. /Not until I see you pay./ Diversity has taken place /you’re ashamed to see your face. Break mirrors, pull the switch/ enjoy yourself you god damn bitch/ but you sink and drown. /You’re the one to take you down.

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If it can be destroyed, it SHOULD be.


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