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I was deep in the darkness,
But now I see light,
My soul was alit with the fire of night.
I was so scared I would end up there,
But I want to be stronger,
So I am holding on longer.
I am better than I was,
But the longer I pretend,
Pulls me closer to that end.
My angelís are there watching to see,
But will they have to save me,
No, I will stand on my own two feet.
I am not asking for your help,
But to just have you there,
A shoulder to cry on, someone here;
Just to be my friend till the end.

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