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why don't we?
by ^white (Member) - published: May 16, 2008
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Category - Poetry
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I need you like you need toilet paper
You want me like I want less salt
I know you like you wanna know Jessica Alba
You see me like I dream to see Jude Law
I hold you like you hold the xbox controller
You catch me like I catch the epidemics
I have you like you have the headaches
You miss me like I miss Will Smith’s bod
So lets smash some things and get together!


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The following comments are for "why don't we?"
by ^white

Too damn funny!
Quite the analogies! Sounds like a on the edge of pain type of an affair....NICE!!

Thanks for the smile

( Posted by: TAMMYHENDRIX [Member] On: May 23, 2008 )

laughs.
oh yes! the pain type of affair but cracks me up all the same!

( Posted by: ^white [Member] On: June 10, 2008 )





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