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Your unfailing memory failed to memorize me.
Your scrutinizing sight was too blind to see me.
Your skillful tricks didn’t do me right.
Your confidence charmed me in to disgust.
Your humor consisted of blank stares.
Your chemistry only reacted to doofuses.
Your math counted multiple girlfriends.
Your diligence persevered me in to ‘trash’ file.
Your sincerity loved bidding me goodbyes.
Your disciplined routines regularly broke me.
Tell me why you’re still breathing please.

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