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every day I breathe you
hold your sad music and
listen to your solitude

every night I want to
take you into my dreams
whispering away your pain

every moment I burn to
wallow in the warm honey
of our mad, impossible lust

oh god if only I could

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In five hundred years time, most of us will be forgotten dust. But Hitler will still be remembered, God loves irony.


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The following comments are for "Every Day"
by Ogg

Take my heart..please!
AH! A man after my own heart.

Beautifully passionate. Loved it

When I say man of my dreams...if you wish read my piece called "I Know You" you'll see what I mean

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( Posted by: TAMMYHENDRIX [Member] On: May 23, 2008 )

Hi Tammy
I did indeed read 'I know You' and have to say that there were certainly echoes of my poem in there. Thanks for taking time to read and comment.
Later
Paul

( Posted by: Ogg [Member] On: May 25, 2008 )





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