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Why should I blame her that her pelvis
beckons to me like violent chocolate,

Her loose skirt ready to fall off like a
spent beast of prey in order to reveal,

a new world as dear as they come....


2



I am proclaiming that
these lips of spring, that

kiss among the beasts,
slowly now bud, those

lips speechless, that
drip the honey waters

from your flowing mouth,
which sings sweet, swift

hymns of praise for you
and me.

3



Suddenly I saw her and cried,
before I\'m old I shall have written


her one poem, as cold and passionate,
as the dawn hitting her backside and


breasts, hands on her spartan hips,
attracting my feverish attention, as I


howled into this nightly nest.





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