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those twin azure occipital orbs sparkle a light sky colored blue
radiant of aura, charisma and persona shine thru those eyes
which house a magnetic charm whence they immediately drew
even to moi self, yet protocol disallows yourself to fraternize
this fellow who rues keeping his head in the sand like an emu
not a shadow of a doubt that tug drawn strongly from other guys
re: that je ne sais quoi quality felt by countless more than a few
perhaps former lovers blessed while passion still dormant lies
such cherished memories at thy angelic spirit most likely grew
gumption beckoned path you did chews with many sup plies
challenging abilities to adjust and acclimate to urban zone new
i hope to communicate - though awkwardly this male tries
to convey an inexplicable appeal t'will possibly prompt ye to shew
me away like a horsetail swishing pesky aggressive flies
grievance against fate that thy companion could be similar to you.




------
matthew scott harris


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The following comments are for "stephanie klassner"
by dutu9p8u

dump 'im
lose this guy, he is ruining your poetry. (just kidding of course)

BW

( Posted by: BWOz [Member] On: May 13, 2008 )





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