Average Rating 0.00 (0 votes) You must login to vote The soldier dozes peacefully in a fetal crescent moon Cocooned within his tube of olive nylon I look upon broad shoulders and the knees drawn up thereto Think the difference ’tween a man and boy’s a small one

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