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These days
I have trouble
Falling asleep.
I feel that I cannot
Waste a moment of my life,
I feel that my next moment
Will be my last
And that I want to stay
Awake to enjoy it.

These days I feel
Every bone in my body.
My eyes are prone to darkness,
My knees bend and fall,
My heart keeps looking for
Friends and family who have
Left me here wondering
Why I can't fall asleep.

But, I am tired,
Oh, so tired.
I can barely keep
My eyes open...
But, I can't blink,
Less I miss you again.

In my dreams.

------
Ronald Peter Ciras


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