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The Colour of Pleasure

The moon, his heart,
The sun, her life
They shine their beauty for the lovers of mankind
Tell the story of two lovers called darkness and light.

From the Green violet waves in dancing over the artic snow,
to the fiery explosions fo summer sunrise
Their bodies touching create a million colors
The colours that dance with the sky
The colours of love between darkness and light

Its a colour we see when love takes over the first time
The colour of pleasure, the colour of life
That pulsing instinct, the premordial heart inside.

She Burns the sky at sunset
He shines the stars in her eyes

Just for one momment they can kiss
That momment, like the first emotion we feel in life
That breath that is gifted at birth, and returned to the heavens when we die
" For one second everday" he tells her
" One second for all time"

She brings the mornings, he brings the nights
Two lovers, blushing in each others sight
They meet once a day
Make love every sunset and every sunrise

Two lovers called darkness and light.


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The following comments are for "The Colour of Pleasure"
by Shaza89

The Colour of Pleasure
A superbly written poem full of iridescent light. Your words possess bold colors in day or night, and they sing out, with resonate to the soul Truly, these words shall turn into gold.

( Posted by: FireFly747 [Member] On: May 26, 2008 )

The Invention of Color
Pleasure comes in an array of colors
Many yet to be discovered

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: May 6, 2013 )





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