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I see him from the top
Barking up the wrong tree

Silly little boy
By the barn
With the pigs

I wonder how
Many piglets
Saw he

Surely
He missed the one
That flew

Up here
To meet me

“My brothers
And sisters will die
If he finds me”
She said to me

I sighed looking
Down and over
Seeing Byron

“He is kosher,
You worry needlessly.
Besides he won't look
Near me.”

And he will never find
You and me
Considering
Pigs don’t fly



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"You're so free, yeah you were right about me,
Can I get myself back from underneath this guilt that will crush me,
And in the choir i saw a sad messiah,
He was bored and tired of my laments,
said 'I died for you one time but never again.'"
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