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pieced anew
once fallen apart
spirit freed


04.25.08

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forming compressed geometric representations through manipulation of borrowed words





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The following comments are for "open during reconstruction"
by Bobby7L

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Hi

Of course you must have had Lit.org in mind when you wrote this?

Eric

( Posted by: Fairplay [Member] On: May 8, 2008 )

Eric..mind's eye
Eric,
Interesting take..Mind's eye of viewer brings own perception to process..transliteration which follows is always influenced by their experience/what viewer believes to be true.

Eastern discipline referenced: allowing self to fall apart without going to pieces, heart and mind becoming more receptive, hopefully, with awareness/raised consciousness to follow..kind of like a Spring cleaning..an uncluttering...with open window of/to mind's eye aired out, fresh air can come in...

Thanks for input.

Imagining,
Robert William

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: May 8, 2008 )

poewhit
I'm with you there. WHERE'S THE CRAZY GLUE ????

( Posted by: poewhit [Member] On: May 13, 2008 )

new construction
poewhit-
Thanks for comment.

B

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: May 15, 2008 )





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