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Alone
by Myndraker (Member) - published: May 6, 2008
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Category - Poetry
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A perfect time to write
No end in sight
To this loneliness at hand.
Pushed everyone away
Now isolated are my days
The silence is more then I can stand.
Now in my own dispair
I tell myself I don’t care
If another human I ever befriend.
They’re just hurt and pain
What is there to gain
so no more heart will I lend.
But it is a lie
I break and cry
A wet pillow knows my shame.
What have I done
My friends are none
And it is me I have to blame....



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by Myndraker

to be alone
i really liked this a lot, mainly because i can relate 110%. Keep up the good work, I look forward to reading more from you





( Posted by: thebeast [Member] On: May 10, 2008 )

Life goes on without me




http://seivadle.googlepages.com/justagigolo

( Posted by: Fairplay [Member] On: May 11, 2008 )





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