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A perfect time to write
No end in sight
To this loneliness at hand.
Pushed everyone away
Now isolated are my days
The silence is more then I can stand.
Now in my own dispair
I tell myself I don’t care
If another human I ever befriend.
They’re just hurt and pain
What is there to gain
so no more heart will I lend.
But it is a lie
I break and cry
A wet pillow knows my shame.
What have I done
My friends are none
And it is me I have to blame....

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The following comments are for "Alone"
by Myndraker

to be alone
i really liked this a lot, mainly because i can relate 110%. Keep up the good work, I look forward to reading more from you

( Posted by: thebeast [Member] On: May 10, 2008 )

I can perfectly well understand your feelings by this poem. well done. though it's a bit mysterious.
Good work. But I have to tell you It made me very upset.

( Posted by: ilgaar [Member] On: August 30, 2009 )

To Understandable
Thank you for reading and sharing how my poem affected you. You said that it upset you, would you mind sharing what you mean by that? Did it upset you in a bad way? Were you offended by it? I'm just curious. I hope it was in a good way...

( Posted by: Myndraker [Member] On: September 20, 2010 )

To "to be alone"
I appreciate your comment! I haven't been very active in my writing over this last year or so. Much change. I hope to resume soon. Again, thanks!

( Posted by: Myndraker [Member] On: September 20, 2010 )

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