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by icemoon (Member) - published: April 28, 2008
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Category - Poetry
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The vexed oceans and streams unite
and invade the silence of dreams,
insidious glass images of
the wounded earth are replayed,
alongside visions of pre-birth,
in waking hours the dreamers
are visited by the watery glade.

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whoever you are come forth these are the days that must happen to you.


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by icemoon

Water flows in dreams...
Beautiful! Now your speaking my language. There be no other profound existence/awareness like that of the "dream."

Thank you for the sweeping words.

( Posted by: TAMMYHENDRIX [Member] On: May 7, 2008 )





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