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roots rock kissing
wasting Sunday afternoon
rolling with Tosh's beat
feeling no sunshine in sight
just spanakopita and bhaklava
pinot noir's bouquet in our embrace

dressing Monday morning before trains depart
to world missing jazz chords
and her best surprise eyes
Billie sings for us one last time
to forever's return
we smile


04.25.08

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ghost voiceprints




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The following comments are for "forever's return"
by Bobby7L

Robert William
Glad to see you take time out for Holliday. Refreshed for the grind on Monday.I love bhaklava smell in the morning. Enjoy minimalist wine. Later.

Charlie.

( Posted by: williamhill [Member] On: April 28, 2008 )

of ouzo and our confessions
Charlie-
Thanks for visiting...Stop by Literarymary.com, if you get a chance. Lans, Jenifer, Andrew, Renae, among others from old gang, can be found there. (senryupsyched)

RW

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: April 29, 2008 )





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