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Explain to the corpse of a seven-year-old;
Soldier Boy, defending the country...
Explain to the radiation-poisoned little girl
that by fighting battles with tactical warheads
not hand to hand is what necessity dictates

Just follow orders, never question and ye shall
inherit the earth...scorched and burned beneath
your boots. The wide eyes of disembodied heads
stare forever blindly forward at nothing...nothing.
Their mouths agape, fresh maggot meal
screaming silently forever...We Congratulate You.


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