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WHITE PEAKS
by R.K.Singh (Member) - published: April 25, 2008
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Category - Haiku
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Sea waves
roll from far away
white peaks


--R.K.SINGH

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R K Singh


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by R.K.Singh

poewhit
So iceburgs have white peaks - tell the TITANIC

( Posted by: poewhit [Member] On: April 26, 2008 )

haiku
I like how this connects snowy mountains with the white caps of waves. I thought about the weather and the clouds catching the moisture off the ocean - taking it up into the atmosphere and carrying it along to become snow flakes to adorn our peaks. There's a lot to think about in this haiku and that's a good thing.


( Posted by: Penelope [Member] On: April 27, 2008 )

haiku
Thanks poewhit and Penelope for your comments.

( Posted by: R.K.Singh [Member] On: May 17, 2008 )

Beautiful connections
If "white peaks" refers to the sea foam?...(is that what it's called?)...then I think that is one of the most beautiful actions of water. Also love the ripples water makes; the flow of it; the connection with water we all have but few of us aknowledge.

Amazing how eight little words can say so much.

Thank you for this beautiful image.

( Posted by: TAMMYHENDRIX [Member] On: May 17, 2008 )

white peaks
Thanks Tammyhendrix for your very considered and apreciative comment on my haiku. You are so kind to me.
R K

( Posted by: R.K.Singh [Member] On: May 31, 2008 )





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