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I drifted into this groovy scene
Could this be a movie theme?
You put me here on earth
The needle tracks in both arms hurt
Lord, my knees are touching dirt
Well, I got these sacred rosaries
Now, I need your attention, please
Release me from this unholy tease
You know, I like my cocaine on the rocks
It looks like naked trees in the shower
Yeah, it hangs like sweet fruit, from trees
Man, cocaine rides like six white horses
She rides around dark streets, at night
Yeah, she knows about this game of life
Until, I get back on that white horse, again



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The following comments are for "Six White Horses"
by FireFly747

heroin
I always believed horse was slang for heroin. Other than that morsel of useless information I found your poem a bit tame considering the topic.

( Posted by: Penelope [Member] On: May 13, 2008 )





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