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Roses
by tinsoldier (Member) - published: April 23, 2008
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Category - Poetry
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A balcony full of roses
Is like your sweet love for me.
They smile and astound,
Blush when they are admired,
Tenderly holding my breath.


Then one day in all suddenness
The roses I no longer see.
Since you are not around
The flowers grow sad and tired,
And they miss you to death.


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by tinsoldier

Plastic Flowers




Seems like nothing lasts for ever... we tried the everlasting plastic age...and found forever is too long.

Eric

( Posted by: Fairplay [Member] On: April 26, 2008 )

poewhit
miss you to death is very - profound - can't think of a nuch deeper hole.

( Posted by: poewhit [Member] On: April 26, 2008 )





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