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****** DISCLAIMER: This submission contains adult language and content, reader discretion is advised.******

The way you make me feel at night
When the darkness creeps up inside
Full of sorrow
No tomorrow
In my mind there's nowhere to hide

The blackness and pain I try to fight
To no avail, the claws digging deep
Covered with mud
Tainting my blood
I long to be forever asleep

Wholly consumed, a cancerous blight
Every emotion poisoned and bare
Happiness gone
Sunshine withdrawn
Knowing for sure that nobody cares


How could you steal my vitality (Drag me down)
How could you lose all morality (Make me drown)
Love, the meaning of brutality


Never ending, no reprieve in sight
Repeating forever in my head
Mistakes I made
Sharpened the blade
That sliced my heart, I feel cold and dead

As much as I want, try as I might
I can't wash off the maddening thought
That you just laugh
You don't give half
A shit about me, the love that I sought


How could you steal my vitality (Drag me down)
How could you lose all morality (Make me drown)
Love, the meaning of brutality


You dare (Do this to me)
You don't care (How much I bleed)
It's not fair (I'll never be free)

I should just end it now
But I can't decide how
Sweat beading on my brow
The cut is made


How could you steal my vitality (Drag me down)
How could you lose all morality (Make me drown)
Love, the meaning of brutality

All your fault is this fatality (My life bled)
All your fault is my insanity (Now I'm dead)
All because of your brutality (Your heart is...)
All because of your sick vanity (Your life is...)
All because you lack humanity (Your love is...)
Brutal


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