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Comfortable Silence
by Tammy Hendrix

The grass is damp and cool
against the small of my back
Tickling fancies of my vast imaginations

It's scent, it's feel, so clean;
So crisp and so, so calming
Natures invitation to a comfortable silence

Skies dark with tiny bursts of twinkling eyes
I watch them in awe of their beauty;
Of their possibilities

Stars bright amongst the darkness
With their hypnotized curiosity's
They watch me in awe of my beauty;
Of my possibilities

What glorious freedoms these wide open spaces offer
Lying in the middle of an enormous naked field
Surrounded by serenading violins
Played upon the legs of crickets

What profound freedoms my imaginations have to offer
Lying naked in the middle of an enormous field
Surrounded by the rush of Gods breath
Played across my nakedness
like serenading violins

The breeze chills me
An orgasmic capturing of my breath
My eyes rushed with slight tears of gratitude
Such an obvious presence
For those who nurture sight
What passions of such purity I nurture

I am not alone here
With my nakedness for all to see
My blanket lies beneath me
With whiskful little hands
Fondling my neck; my legs;
The arch of my back

I am not alone here
With no need for a fig leaf
I am layered upon by the universe
With all presence of the surreal
They kiss me; they caress me;
They touch me

My sacrifice is their seduction

I am Nurturer
I am Mother
I am Goddess





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by TAMMYHENDRIX

poewhit
Had a real floating feeling reading the poem

( Posted by: poewhit [Member] On: April 23, 2008 )

Thank you Poewhit
I was floating when I wrote it. Quite surprised to see the finished piece. I'm shocked at some of the things that come out of me.

Thank you for your time

( Posted by: TAMMYHENDRIX [Member] On: April 23, 2008 )

Lovely!
Thanks for this, quite made my morning! I love the image of the 'enormous naked field' and the line 'I am layered on by the universe'.

This time of year I am thinking a lot about warm breezes, the thrill of chilling gusts and the glory of a starlit night...your piece only intensifies those feelings.

Michael

( Posted by: Sebastian08 [Member] On: April 25, 2008 )

Thank you Sebastian08
Well thank you very much Sebastian08,
It felt good to write. Haven't been back on lit. but once since they went down. Not a lot of feedback here.


I also love the warm breezes of summer. Yea, the chilling gusts are pretty good as well.

Thank you for your time.

( Posted by: TAMMYHENDRIX [Member] On: April 25, 2008 )





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