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The shadow of the earth
gives birth to the
moon uncharted dreams,
a solar wind blows them north
they are stored in a
cold planets frozen streams
staring at the moon
i feel cold,
sleeping i watch lunar tales unfold.

whoever you are come forth these are the days that must happen to you.

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The following comments are for "frozen"
by icemoon

Oh the possibilities.
I like the dreamer style of this. Maybe because that's what I am...a dreamer.

Thank you
Beautiful piece

( Posted by: TAMMYHENDRIX [Member] On: April 22, 2008 )

hi tammy thanks-what did you mean oh the possibilities-i am intrigued.

( Posted by: icemoon [Member] On: April 22, 2008 )

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