Average Rating 8 (1 votes) Rating Rated by 8 chapter1 You must login to vote Tell me this world I know not why Today, I pierced A cloud in this blue sky, With Cupid’s arrow of love Well, she denied and cried like a River, oh joy, oh bliss, As the sun’s stood by, And blinked both eyes, Then, orange-red Cheeks, blushed From the edges Of these cloud This love sings loud, When you are piercing clouds

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