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Forgive me if I'm unduly pestering your psyche
that you're busy right now is all you need say;
of course, there's always room for misinterpretation
but I've seen this movie one too many times, I'm well
aware of the ending...right before the credits roll.

I'm deathly sick of re-runs, thought you had some fresh
material you wanted to offer - as a writer I'm used to
rejections - or perhaps I just misread between the lines.
No matter. This soundtrack's getting old. Say what you
mean, mean what you say. That's all I ask. But if that's
too much, go ahead and cancel my subscription. I don't
need any extra issues.


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The following comments are for "One Too Many Times..."
by Tigerlily

cinematic
Tigerlily~

I enjoyed this piece, the theme held strong throughout and I like the touch of wordplay there at the end. This poem isn't as lyrically beautiful as some of your other work but I like it all the same.

Keep them coming.

Bart

( Posted by: Bartleby [Member] On: February 18, 2004 )





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