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Whalesong
by icemoon (Member) - published: April 18, 2008
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Category - Poetry
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A dead whale crossed the earth,
guided by the dark bells
in the cathedrals of gravity on fire.
He passed through me on a bridge
built from the ashes of a dream.

I rebuilt the whale from the glass
echo of his song and became
his passenger journeying
through the seas,a harpoon
broke us into fragments,scattering
us across the seabed.

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whoever you are come forth these are the days that must happen to you.


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by icemoon

poewhit
Reminded me of MOBY DICK

( Posted by: poewhit [Member] On: April 23, 2008 )

wow
this is a trip, surreal in every aspect-as a dream- seems to be pulled directly from the subconcious. very much enjoyed.

( Posted by: ghostpoisonsturgeon [Member] On: April 26, 2008 )





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